Trailer Production: Second Draft

This is the second draft of my final trailer. Although not much has changed since my last draft, I feel I am not much closer to creating a successful thriller trailer. The one major thing that has changed since the first draft is the volume of the dialogue, as you could hardly hear it on the initial video. This means I am now one step closer to having my trailer complete. I also feel I am now ready to gain feedback on my draft to help me see what people believe is missing from my work.