Trailer Production: First Draft

This is the first draft of my trailer that I have created using Adobe Premiere. I have already picked out a few elements of the trailer that I feel could be developed or changed and plan to do this for my second draft. After I have created a second draft I will the begin to gather feedback on what's good and what's bad so I can alter smaller elements for my final product, ensuring that it suits my target audience. For my next draft I plan to change: the volume of the dialogue, the pace of the trailer and add in a scream as she gets kidnapped. I feel that these minor changes will make a substantial difference to the overall look to the product.